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11/23/24, 5:04 PM
Great start! Looking forward to the next installment!
Nov 22, 2024
gdlosh13@gmail.com
11/23/24, 1:22 PM
I would give them 5 stars. I want to join that gym.

11/23/24, 3:40 PM
@gdlosh13@gmail.com Me too!!! Just so you know, a couple other things inspired this story. Obviously, I mentioned my recent trip to the gym, and which I noticed the cum-like soap in the shower. But at my local gym, which happens to be very close to a military base, I notice a lot of the guys posing in the locker room. Men between the ages of 18 - 30, seem to stand in front of the mirror (half-naked or fully clothed) and just talk selfies over and over. I've never seen anything quite like it. Plus there's a guy on [Instagram](https://www.instagram.com/rickyaldrete/) who takes this really hot gym selfies. He's always wearing spandex, and just looks incredibly hot. So I guess the combination of all this got me thinking about a hot, gym transformation scene. Again, it's a gym that I would want to join.

Anonymous
11/23/24, 4:00 PM
@[rubbrsome](/user/show/13662) Well I was am extremely hot story. I did not see ir coming until the soap scene. I was hooked. Well to be honest I was hooked from the flashes. I am not a gym person but would join that one.
Nov 22, 2024
11/23/24, 10:01 AM
This store was awesome. It is a nice change of pace from your usual work, but please take it a a compliment! You are really showcasing your writing skills in different genres. The pacing was good and action was better. Thank you for writing! Always looking forward to reading your stuff!

11/23/24, 3:34 PM
@[Gay_Genes](/user/show/298626) I appreciate the compliment. Thanks.
11/23/24, 2:30 PM
The moment I started reading I knew I'm going to binge this story. I'm curious to see what happens next. I know it's part of the plot and all, but I have to say: Mike is a terrible doctor both ethically and professionally. Anna deserves a raise and a promotion.
Nov 22, 2024
gdlosh13@gmail.com
11/23/24, 1:23 PM
I would give that gym 5 stars. I want to join that gym.
11/23/24, 11:12 AM
I'm not sure how I missed this story, it's unique and intriguing. I'm surprised that Yazan isn't really mad at Mike. At first I thought that Mike didn't really tell him, but in this chapter he says that he's the one that got him into this mess. Also, Mike you fucker, go visit Yazan yourself!
11/23/24, 8:20 AM
That was hot. Well worth the wait.
Nov 22, 2024
11/22/24, 11:35 PM
Hot. Definitely filled a few jerk sessions before I finished the story. 🤤

11/22/24, 11:40 PM
@Flamefox23 These are the best comments. I love knowing my ideas results in men jerking off. I only hope you shot your cum all over your chest and belly, and then smeared it all over yourself. Hot stuff!
11/22/24, 8:10 PM
It can get lonely at the top. I can see the problem of surrounding yourself by only like-minded people miles away; surrounding yourself with _yourself_ isn't healthy. It's fine to talk to mirrors... until the mirror starts talking back. Suddenly, you're crazy. Alexander wasn't having fun playing games because hes too good at them. He's truly alone; no one can match him with his godlike powers. Alexander doesn't need more people below him, he needs someone equal - someone to surprise him. The best gifts you can get isn't what you ask for, but something you never knew you wanted. It's wishful thinking to think there's someone on the planet that could understand "Unit Prime" more than Prime himself, but I'm rooting for Alexander to find someone that can give him the love he needs but not what he "wants". Post-nut clarity can go hard. Anyway, I love Alexander. A dominant God with a heart of gold that resists his baser desires is super hot. Great chapter.
Nov 22, 2024
11/21/24, 11:36 PM
Okay ... I should say that this story was unexpected. It came about because when I was at the gym this morning, I took a shower after my workout. And in the shower, I couldn't help but notice that the soap that's provided by the gym, and coming out of the wall-mounted dispenser, looked really similar to cum. Well that just got my mind going. What if this is cum? What if I'm lathering up in other men's cum? Well, I got home and started writing. Did I know Sam was going to be a social media influencer? Nope. That just seemed to happen as I wrote it. But somehow, that created the idea of these camera pillars that would give adrenaline boosts to the workouts. Weird ... I had no idea where that came from. Anyways, I guess what I'm saying is .... I don't know where this story came from. All I had was an idea for cum-filled soap dispenser, and next thing I know, I churned out a story that I hadn't planned in the least. So there's probably continuity errors that make no sense, probably a lot of questions that I really don't have answers to. And no, I don't plan on writing another chapter. But if any of you guys want to add onto this story, please be my guest. And please please, if any of you guys are rich and think of opening your own gym that has cum-filled soap dispensers .... please extend me a membership.

11/22/24, 7:19 PM
@[rubbrsome](/user/show/13662) I love this story precisely because it has a dream-like intensity and doesn't get too bogged down in exposition. It's packing a lot of powerful images--the white teeth, the moment where Marshall rubs his cum into Sam's dick, etc--into a short story, and I love the notion of the selfie-taking pillars delivering a boost of adrenaline and testosterone every time the picture is snapped. Great work!

11/22/24, 7:38 PM
@[Hypnothrill](/user/show/37386) I think you're right, Hypnothrill. It very much so has a dream-like quality. When writing, I really was getting into the fluid exchange. The visual images of rubbing your cum onto another guy, they rubbing their cum onto you. And all that fluid exchange causing the men to lose both their inhibitions and self-control, furthering them into a heightened state of orgasmic bliss. Geez ... I'm getting hard now just thinking about it. Thank you for reading. Now, when can I read your next story? Seriously ... I feel I'm not the only guy anxiously awaiting the next Hypnothrill fantasy.