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11/25/24, 7:17 AM
Amazing chapter can't wait for more of this and your other stories.
Ben
11/25/24, 5:03 AM
This was super hot!! Loved it!!!
11/25/24, 1:56 AM
How can we make Jamie extremely hairy? He should get an mbp and grow that moustache into a huge walrus covering his whole mouth and chin…
11/25/24, 12:55 AM
Good job. Giving them "quests" to motivate them to do things they wouldn't normally and to get used to their new "roles" is very clever and makes the changes in personality and actions feel much more natural. More like they're doing the changes to themselves instead of having them imposed on them by the game. The fact that the two are also taking completely different paths adds some variety, and my guess is Alvis will end up going down the Int pathway. Excited for chapter 2. Keep up the good work.
11/24/24, 9:07 PM
I'm shocked that there aren't any comments yet! This story is really good and I'm looking forward to what's to come. Now I have to go back and look at your other series.

11/24/24, 9:23 PM
@[HimboPup](/user/show/10011980) Thank you that's very kind. They'll slot together so you will see plenty of cross over characters. As to why there are not many comments, pass. But I only started writing them last month for the Halloween challenge maybe it takes awhile for readers to commit to reading longer more character driven stories and new writers to learn what the audience wants. Plus this one only went uo a few days ago :blush:
11/24/24, 4:04 PM
How happy I was to discover a new series devoted to the dumb jock genre - it’s not everyday we have the pleasure to read stories like that and this one is very well written, congratulations! In fact, I loved how well you are hitting the tropes - I fucking love all the situations in which the main character gets his face pressed or shoved into the dumb jock’s crotch, feeling his big cock against his mouth. I absolutely love scenes like that and I literally can’t get enough of it. Sometimes I even think scenes like that, where sexual situations happen with crotches, cocks and asses getting shoved into faces, or the MC falling face down on a hot jock’s crotch are even hotter than the sex scenes. I loved how in the second chapter John just shoved his crotch into the MC’s face, and in this one his cock actually slipped from his briefs to slap him in the face. So hot, man! Please keep this scenes coming and never stop writing them, and it will be even better if other dumb, hung jocks end up pressing their crotches and cocks into MC’s face due to clumsiness, an accident or whatever reason. All that being said, I can’t wait to actually see how you will develop the actual sex scenes. The only criticism I have for your stories is that the chapters are too short for my tastes, because I want more, man!! I’m really really into this story and can’t stop thinking about all the different, creative, hot scenarios for those sexy dumb army jocks to fuck the hell out of MC, all the while being oblivious to their sexual prowess. Thanks so much for writing this and keep us fed with the daily chapters, you’re a champ for doing that. Cheers!

11/24/24, 6:14 PM
@[Elmara](/user/show/910352) Wow!! I'm very flattered that you're enjoying my writing and.. believe it or not.. I was actually considering sending you an email earlier today in appreciation of your work. :smiling_face_with_tear: Dumb Jock Roommate may be my most re-read story of all time and I'm obviously taking heavy inspiration from it! There's nothing that has made me feel quite like Jon and Theo together, ever, and I wish I really understood why. I think beyond the pure fantasy of it, you opened my eyes to a fascinating archetype of a relationship in which both parties participated with such enthusiasm and motivation (for their own reasons) that their interactions felt entirely plausible and real ...even if unlikely in real life. But what I loved the most was the playfulness in all their interactions and all the creative ideas which led to their eventual and unavoidable coupling which both were eager to have happen. I also really liked the ambiguity of the characters... Sometimes I would think that Jon was actually a genius and he did what he did because he perceived the other person to be attracted to him and an easy target, so he basically engineered these "accidents" which he knew would be tolerated by Theo so he could use him as a fleshlight whenever he felt like it without having himself appear gay ...or maybe he did all that subconsciously... In fact, I LOVE that their interactions are never perceived as gay romantic sex by Jon even though he is more eager to be around and (accidentally) insert himself in Theo than a newly wed mormon couple. Given all of that and more, theres a sense whenever they are fucking that this all is just an innocent play session gone wrong... which is just an insanely hot idea. I'm not even going to try to analyze why that is... With my story I'm attempting to lean a bit more towards "realism" wherein its not outright dicks slipping into holes (yet) but things that can be expected to happen, happen, but with a lucky gay nerd to witness them (or be otherwise affected by them). I think have some good ideas for how to escalate things in the next few chapters so I'm not going to keep edging everyone for much longer... though it may take me some time since I have to be back in class tomorrow... Cheers!
Cookiesgal
11/24/24, 4:00 PM
Really loved the story

11/24/24, 5:53 PM
@Cookiesgal Thank you Cookiesgal! 😁
11/24/24, 4:37 PM
Fantastic story, and so very hot and imaginative. Excellent job. I hope we see more from you. You’re talented, and I like how you think.
Nov 22, 2024
11/24/24, 8:42 AM
Just joining in the chorus saying this was AMAZING. As @Hypnothrill said, you do an amazing job with the dreamlike quality of the story--the fact that Sam doesn't recognize Marshall's clothing until after they've spoken a while, the sudden appearance of other characters (when Sam enters he mentions that the gym isn't full, but by the shower scene there are lots of guys), and the weird flow of time in the space in general adds something extra special. Plus there's something to be said for instant-conversion stories: I love a good long resistance/brainwashing period, but sometimes it's amazing to watch someone just instantly fall under the spell. Fantastic job. :)
11/24/24, 8:01 AM
Love the writing.

11/24/24, 8:32 AM
@Flamefox23 :heart: I rewrote sentences so many times...