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Wenceslost
11/26/24, 8:01 PM
Hell yeah? Hell yeah. Loving the vibe and worldbuilding here!

11/26/24, 11:26 PM
@[Wenceslost](/user/show/10008527) Thank you. What intrigued you? What are you hoping to see next?
11/26/24, 11:16 PM
A fascinating start! I'm curious to see where this one leads, and more about this universe in general!
Anonymous
11/26/24, 1:05 PM
Really fun opening chapter! Excited to see what comes next
Nov 22, 2024
11/24/24, 7:29 AM
Great and so hot! Loved the double hit of the flashes bringing him in and getting him pumped and mostly naked, and then the unexpected cum soap providing the fuel for the orgy. Love to join that gym and become one of the men!

11/25/24, 3:42 PM
@[jakey](/user/show/994256) Honestly, after writing this story, I wonder why gyms actually haven't adopted the idea of "selfie stations". I think some men wouldn't mind a certain lack of privacy in having pictures or videos taken of them. I think a method or lack of privacy document could be drafted in which both the patron and the gym could agree to. And it would certainly facilitate the man from having to always hold his camera up to take those selfies; the pictures have a much more professionalism. I wouldn't be surprised if we start seeing gyms with "selfie stations" in the near future.

11/26/24, 7:30 AM
@[rubbrsome](/user/show/13662) Some do, especially the ones that focus on competitive bodybuilders. They may even have a posing room with mirrors and lights.
Marcsn
11/23/24, 1:49 AM
I really like your writing. The way you set up the scenes, just perfect.

Anonymous
11/26/24, 7:27 AM
@[Marcsn](/user/show/10055119) you can read ahead and read some other stories i've posted for FREE on my patreon!!!
11/25/24, 9:16 PM
Really good start, looking forward to seeing more deflating escapades!

11/26/24, 6:49 AM
@[icandestroy](/user/show/914356) Thanks for the read. Ehh… I’ve written another bit with these two, but it’s all boring character development, it probably won’t ever see the light of day.
Nov 22, 2024
gdlosh13@gmail.com
11/24/24, 1:14 PM
Will there more like it cumming our way?

11/25/24, 3:44 PM
@gdlosh13@gmail.com Sorry, this story was a "one off". I have no ideas on how to further the narrative. Everything I wanted to tell happened to Sam. Probably the only thing left, and I think the reader would make this assumption is: as an influencer, Sam would've encouraged more men to visit this gym, and the process would repeat itself as each curious man entered its doors.
Nov 22, 2024
11/24/24, 6:02 AM
I also feel that some milky white shower gels/liquid soaps look like cum, especially those that claim "added musk". Of course, that refers to synthetic musk similar to the smell of deer musk, but sometimes I wonder what if it is "human musk"? Reading this story was so satisfying that I couldn't help but want to take a shower, lubricate and jerk off with musk soap.

11/25/24, 3:38 PM
@[Tofu83](/user/show/87624) If you felt compelled to shower, lubricate and jerk off ... then your programming is perfectly installed and you are functioning as expected.
11/25/24, 2:42 PM
The pictures you put here with your excellent story are flawless. You definitely know what you’re writing about.
11/25/24, 2:40 PM
Fantastic, and oh wow!