Recent Comments

11/23/25, 8:28 PM
He should just tell the Mom at this point. Hot story, but why would he not tell her or hate his Dad for this wildness haha
11/23/25, 12:04 PM
Incredible work!

11/23/25, 12:18 PM
@[Dace](/user/show/1217645) Thank you! I’m actually in the process of writing a follow up, so I hope you read and enjoy that one too when it gets posted.
Anonymous
11/23/25, 7:33 AM
This was amazing!

11/23/25, 11:23 AM
@Anonymous I’m glad you enjoyed it. Thanks for reading!
11/17/25, 10:57 PM
Hot story, but it's tough to root for rapists. I hope Drew and Travis get revenge.

11/21/25, 3:06 AM
@[amul](/user/show/10003734) I agree with you)

11/21/25, 4:18 PM
@[amul](/user/show/10003734) chapter 3 will be also dark but only spoiler I can give is chapter 4 will be named " rise and fall of the idiots " which will be about ramirez's and o'malley's back story , their games and where they end up and how they end up there . for the studio I am planing to take them down eventually but I think this story will be 10 chapters so before the dawn there will be some more darkness . new marines , new events , threats , obedience , defiance and sun rise .

11/22/25, 9:44 PM
@[Hypnoboy-7](/user/show/10055892) Thanks for shedding light on where this story is going! I look forward to seeing how it unfolds.
11/22/25, 6:28 PM
this got very sexy and hot at the end
11/22/25, 10:44 AM
Need more of this!
Anonymous
11/22/25, 8:32 AM
Loved this it was both hot and funny
Anonymous
11/21/25, 5:32 PM
Hilarious! 🤣
supaboivsvillain
11/19/25, 8:58 PM
Congrats, Lucas-- this story/series is becoming my FAVORITE of 2025!:fireworks: Every chapter is riveting and I'm especially enjoying these latest chapters, 'Sticky' & 'Reset'!! If I had grown up with a character like Noah in my life, I would be a completely different person today.... (and I'm not sure if that's a good or a bad thing!) LMAO...:fire: The way you skillfully peel the layers of Liam's submission back chapter-by-chapter....it's quite GENIUS! Looking forward 2 the next chapters!! BRAVO & THANK YOU!!!:firecracker:

11/21/25, 5:12 PM
@supaboivsvillain dude thank u sm, im blushing over here lmao. glad youre into it my man
11/21/25, 8:17 AM
Masterfully written. Strong and sexy domineering and hopeless surrender. Thanks. šŸ”„šŸ”„šŸ”„

11/21/25, 5:11 PM
@[Toto27](/user/show/10051657) my pleasure man