Recent Comments

11/28/25, 9:31 AM
I rarely comment, but your story is just awesome. The idea of the brainwashing already happened is absolutely genius and now that battle that takes place between each side fighting for Max, is just chefs kiss. As reader of this less sexual but way more erotic story, I'm asking about the background of Thomas and Colby. For now the characters seem a little underdeveloped and all is focusing on Max, at least they dont get the same attention as Max. For Colby and Max' teammates, that might be okay, as they're side characters, but it would be interesting to read more about their background too. Overall this story is chef's kiss and I am really looking forward to see how you have planned to end it. At this point, I have great sympathy for Max and Colby's plan. Good work! Thanks for sharing it

11/28/25, 7:18 PM
@[JasonB2](/user/show/10042798) Mostly because at one point I’d planned on a second book where Maximus goes with colby to the ranch and we learn more there. But I never did it. I got discouraged at how poorly this did and kinda let it sit for quite a few months. It’s been done since June. Just. Kinda gave up. But I decided to let people see it.

11/29/25, 1:23 AM
@[thejazzcat](/user/show/10005285) "But I decided to let people see it." GOOD! Because it is a great story! -_-
11/28/25, 10:29 PM
Nice blend of romance and bdsm elements. Where can I get one of those watches?
11/28/25, 2:28 PM
Can't wait for more

11/28/25, 7:34 PM
@[Jonanator](/user/show/863971) I’ll put the next part up in a few days or so.
11/28/25, 10:37 AM
Oh, sure! Just what I wanted to wake up to; the gut-punch chapter! XD Yes, yes, I know things are darkest before the dawn and all that,... Still adore this story and the characters! Glad to see this chapter up :3 Thank you!

11/28/25, 7:05 PM
@[Blazargus](/user/show/10012784) Haha the real Gut punch hadnt even happened yet.
Bik
11/28/25, 2:56 PM
It's a small thing but I'm living for the increasingly ridiculous ways to write Mom out of the story! It's so funny

11/28/25, 5:06 PM
@Bik I wanted to write that she was trapped on a roller coaster in one chapter but I couldn’t figure out a way to write it in!
11/27/25, 6:32 PM
Incredible story.

11/28/25, 2:56 AM
@[GiveInToTheMusk](/user/show/909380) Thanks again!
11/22/25, 10:44 AM
Need more of this!

11/28/25, 2:53 AM
@[Kyle Cage](/user/show/1756274) I got more for you :)
11/21/25, 2:48 PM
Amazing and well written. Thanks for the work!

11/28/25, 2:53 AM
@[BrGuy](/user/show/10033894) Thank you too for reading it. Glad you enjoyed and I hope I can keep you coming back for more.
11/20/25, 8:21 PM
An amazing start! Very creative, very well written! Love it!

11/28/25, 2:52 AM
@[Corin](/user/show/125990) Thanks very much. It’s about time I gave something back to your website after all the good times it’s given me.
11/27/25, 7:00 PM
You're a fantastic writer. Cannot wait for this to continue.

11/28/25, 1:53 AM
@[GiveInToTheMusk](/user/show/909380) Aww man, you’re too kind. I hope the next chapter can deliver.