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1/11/26, 3:39 PM
Hello, if you've read the story elsewhere, know that I'm posting a revised version here that you won't find elsewhere yet, except gayauthors.
1/10/26, 5:32 PM
Vote: Play it cool Is there an alternative way you want us to vote besides comment? I'm not sure I'm seeing any other way but the number/letter string makes me question it.

1/11/26, 2:31 PM
@[Sieg](/user/show/9699) I'm not currently aware of any proper voting mechanisms on this site, but luv seeing what choices y'all's prefer. Definitely drop some votes down here for which paths you wanna see (who knows, maybe I'll prioritize that strand's development...)
Gaz
1/10/26, 10:41 AM
Hey I really like your writing style, and I love a game reality change story. It’s obvious you have a clear idea who your characters are. As a reader, I’m finding it hard to keep 9 characters in my head. Also, with a choose your own adventure style, you may want to publish a block/thread of chapters at the same time. This is possible using the “Publish on” field. You can select a date more than 7 days from when you publish them (giving the volunteer approval team time to do their magic). Just a suggestions, keep writing, can’t wait to see where this is heading.

1/11/26, 2:19 PM
@[Gaz](/user/show/365297) Really super appreciate this; 9 is a bit much isn't it...hoping to create enough isolating/individualized situations to keep 'em all relevant and cohesive; also hoping to emphasize dif characters and dynamics w/ the many dif story strands...will def keep you readers in mind tho :) That's a great publishing idea (like holy tysm); much is already written so will def employ this! Hope you enjoy
1/11/26, 1:24 AM
Damn what a chapter. Why do i want Agent Tony to be part of his "family" aswell. Maybe he could be a below or slave by Farrow and then Farrow would be back. And wow, that gym scene is so hot. I wonder who snitched about the giant orgy. Maybe a passerby or late student/audience saw whats happening and freaked out. And so Ethan does bottom. So maybe a shapeshifted Derek or Farrow would top him that would be hot. And for his family, and the implications of them being released from his manipulation, i wonder what would happen if Ethan escapes. Hmm.
1/10/26, 11:06 PM
Great and well-written story, thank you. Hot too. As a submissive myself who has experimented with chastity cages I could relate to it. Look forward to future chapters.
1/10/26, 3:31 PM
With scenes as hot as this, I'm missing Oby chapters a lot less.
1/10/26, 2:23 AM
I loved the perspective switches in this, just damn good writing.
1/10/26, 1:31 AM
Oh wow... I wasn't expecting an actual novel sort of story here with depth. This was a pleasant surprise and enjoyable.
1/9/26, 11:29 PM
I hope his agent heartthrob is alright!
1/9/26, 2:19 PM
😏 Hoping these chapters keep on coming!

1/9/26, 11:16 PM
@[NeedControlling](/user/show/1223696) I reckon I got a couple more left in me :kissing_heart: