Recent Comments

3/8/22, 5:47 PM
This is such a cute and hot story. Any chance you might continue?

3/9/22, 1:21 AM
I do have plans to continue—but they are still incubating, so it’ll be a while before I can add to this story! I have a lot of other plans besides this one, too. I do want to, though! Keep an eye out? And of course, I’m making more wholesome stories every day, and I think you’ll find my future output similarly enjoyable. Thanks for reading! I’m glad to see that people are still interested in this. And if you want to recommend it to anyone, it hasn’t gotten a lot of traction and I think it deserves a little more, heh. Thanks again! @Beaner

3/10/22, 7:06 PM
@Soren Fitz good to hear you have more planned. I will do what I can. I know how hard it must be to keep motivated. And in my opinion, there aren't enough cum inflation stories out there. All 5's from me!

7/20/23, 4:09 PM
@[Soren Fitz](/user/show/10011670) I am waitng for that to happen. So far as far as I am concerned this was only the beginning.

7/20/23, 4:58 PM
@[br6205](/user/show/10027864) I would really love to hear why you see this as “only the beginning”. I’ve been trying to figure out how to continue this story for a long time, and I have ideas, but none which have really grabbed me. Another perspective on what this story meant, and why it’s not truly finished, would be helpful to me. I think these three have a lot of struggles left to deal with, given Isaac’s parents at least. That’s all I really know.
Nutiper
5/27/23, 2:40 PM
Finally, some representation on this site for us dudes who scream "Wheee!" while getting fucked! Thank you, I feel seen.

7/20/23, 4:51 PM
@[Nutiper](/user/show/25270) It was easily my favorite part of this chapter. Sheer joy from butt stuff!
7/20/23, 7:19 AM
So damn hot
Kip
3/20/23, 6:44 PM
“I felt the power shooting out of me like I was a fucking Care Bear of cock or something.” THIS is why I come to this site. Sentences like these. Awesome. 😁

3/20/23, 8:03 PM
@[Kip](/user/show/27842) Very glad someone likes that line as much as I myself do.

7/20/23, 2:37 AM
@[Kip](/user/show/27842) Exactly! I was just about to call that line out myself! So good.
7/20/23, 1:57 AM
I'm not even sure why, but this line stands out for me as the hottest part of this chapter: > gave me a smug look and then pulled my pants all the way off in one fluid motion, so quickly that my shoes popped off my feet and spun off to the corners of the room.
7/19/23, 10:46 PM
Happy to see you back writing!
7/19/23, 9:39 PM
Aw man. You make sex so sweet and delightful.
7/19/23, 5:00 PM
Really hope to see this continue, curious to see how it develops!
7/19/23, 4:43 AM
Thanks for the story! It was great! Hope to see more from you soon!!!
7/19/23, 4:17 AM
God this story was so incredibly hot! I love this exact kind of reality-bending control, this was so so good! It reminds me of that one story, I think it was called “(new) post game traditions” by princec. Really great stuff dude
7/18/23, 7:37 PM
This was hot! Love the dynamic between Todd and Max.
7/18/23, 5:30 PM
Why does your protagonist exist if his parents died before he was born?
7/18/23, 11:51 AM
Coming late to this party, but what a party! Being a bottom that loves nothing much that being overwhelmed by dicks and tops, *and* being secretly a sucker for happy stories of human hearts, I’ve been more than fulfilled by your blessed gift to us all. So many thanks for sharing this making story with us!
7/17/23, 10:39 PM
I loved this -- the journey for Talley, the descriptions of Riki and Mads, his first orgy as a bottom, the continued exploration of Consummation and the pantheon. It's honestly a bit of a privilege to be able to read this stuff as you build it up, because it's got real literary merit. I appreciate your talent!
7/17/23, 4:02 AM
Another week, another amazing chapter! It's been a while since I've so looked forward to checking for updates every day. I particularly love how you're balancing the wonderful weight gain with a "social contagion" factor (people slowly being drawn into the gaining fold, so quietly you don't even realize it's happening), along with some genuinely big questions about responsibility, the fear of being named a "narc" (which comes up in a LOT of work spaces), and even algorithm learning. It's a great series, and it has one of my favorite kinks--all of it is fantastic! Well done. :D Oh, and for what I hope to see next: I'd love to see the point of view of someone actually being drawn into the experiment--seeing how their minds work as they justify why they're gaining weight and eating more and more. But whatever you write will surely be great! :)

7/17/23, 2:49 PM
@[Feed Your Head](/user/show/1170832) Thanks! This was so sweet. It means the world to me to see people enjoy the story so far. And the following chapters might include what you look for ;)
Anonymous
7/17/23, 1:03 PM
Hot stuff. I have to say.Hope he becomes the college cum dump.? All those horny teens need a mouth....or an arse,to get off
mic
7/17/23, 10:13 AM
fucking great story, please more dumb jock roommates and getting stuck in positions. great work
7/17/23, 4:45 AM
there isn't actually anything in here about names? adjectives, arguably nicknames, but no _names_. there is nothing about the power of names and no "nominative determinism" going on in this story. maybe that's pedantic criticism, but honestly it seems like you had something already written, slapped a title onto it that relates to the contest tyne but not the story, and uploaded it just for the sake of participating.
6/30/23, 10:25 PM
I don't know that I've read an actual realization moment in this site that was so realistically portrayed (as opposed to forced by transformation or coercion), and it was very sweet. Well done.

7/17/23, 3:35 AM
@[DaymionMC](/user/show/10033419) Well, this is one of the first fics published on GayCupidStories, so I'm not exactly surprised that this is one of the first realistic 'realisations'—it just wasn't the typical _oeuvre_ of Spiral, I'm sure. But I tried my best, and I'm pleased with how it came out (heh). Although most of my stories involve characters who are already certain that they're gay, I care a lot about the theme of self-discovery, so writing this well was important to me.
6/23/23, 4:59 PM
Wow, that was so incredibly sweet, and yet managed to veer away from saccharine, with the help of an almost literal cum geyser at the end. Delightful, funny, and a sweet love story with differentiated characters. Very well done!

7/17/23, 3:32 AM
@[DaymionMC](/user/show/10033419) The fact that it started as a simple "guy goes back in time to get a girl, wakes up with a husband about to top the absolute shit out of him" probably has a bit to do with the wicked turn it takes at the end! But a lot of evolution and many surprises to me went into making it something I could consider beautiful, and not just decadently sexual. I'm glad you found it sweet.
7/16/23, 11:54 PM
Ngl, I would be very happy with a part two.
7/16/23, 8:24 PM
Holy shit. This was PHENOMINAL. More, please!!!
7/16/23, 7:37 PM
Had a reread of this in one go while lounging away in the mountains. What an absolute gem! Thanks again for sharing this world and such wonderful characters with all of us
Anonymous
7/16/23, 6:57 PM
That is sooo hot!
7/16/23, 5:30 AM
This first chapter was awesome! I started reading it earlier, and it was getting me soooo horny, I had to wait until the night to finish the chapter. And I'm glad I did! This was so sexy, and reading how Reed seduced Topger drove me crazy. Can't wait to read the next chapter.
7/15/23, 6:52 PM
I also support the sequel, if you ever do one
7/15/23, 5:05 PM
Incredibly hot!
Vulcan3
7/8/23, 10:54 AM
Fuck me, this story so far is fucking heat into steam sexy shit. Im loving it all, but i had to pause and tell you the Bat enslavement is really dirty stuff i crave. I got the idea of Batman butt raped by an anon type while costumed from a drawing I saw on rule 34. It's fucking the kink shit art you need to include for this chapter. Go to |gay Batman on rule 34|, look on page 19 and you'll see Batman getting a huge dick up his asshole through a tear in his costume. Write later, Maestro

7/15/23, 4:25 PM
@Vulcan3 Hey Maestro! THANKS so much 4 your comments! Glad you're SO into "the Batman bitching" incorporated in this chapter!! I'll check out your recommendation & be sure to incorporate some addt'l Bat enslavement in the upcoming chapters! I'm always open 2 ideas, Sir...so if you feel inclined to share a few, I'd be happy to spin them into some "hot Bat-kink" 4 U! ENJOY your wknd!:sunglasses:
7/14/23, 5:35 AM
LOVE, LOVE, LOVE it bud!!! I never tire of the way you always keep your characters on their toes. I hope we get a nice long stretch of Theo being bitched out, he has certainly earned it. And it's about time for Lex to remind people why he's the person whose name is in the title :P. I also love that Lex seems to have genuine affection for Bernard and Tim. Keeping my fingers crossed that Dick shows up again and has someone fun to fuck ;)

7/15/23, 4:20 PM
@[fanboi214](/user/show/908190) Hi Fanboi! THANKS 4 the positive comments! Super Grateful that you liked/appreciated "the turn of events/tables"! I've had a helluva week, but I'm working on the next chapter as we speak....I will keep ALL your comments in mind, Sir! Also, I saw that you have a new chapter out that I need to get to this weekend...looks like a HOT time 4 Dean! Can't wait! Thanks, again, my friend!:stuck_out_tongue_winking_eye:
7/15/23, 4:17 AM
Rereading this story again! Love it too. My best wishes that life gets (back) on tracks that work for you. Just know you have avid readers for this story when it feels right to complete it. 💜