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3/23/24, 10:08 PM
As always I love your stories… and as always, I am massively jealous of the bottom. Lucky lucky Jun.
3/23/24, 9:30 PM
Hot and entertaining reimagined of Cinderella. I was hoping at the end Sindre would tell the truth to Dom, but oh well. Its still a good story.
3/19/24, 6:56 PM
Just as lovers and friends come into our lives at the right time, so too do stories just like this one. Profoundly touching, in more ways than one 😉🤪 seriously though, thank you for writing such a beautiful work and sharing it for others to enjoy.

OneTimeWriter
3/23/24, 7:06 PM
@[ArcoNorth](/user/show/10032789) Thank you for reading it, and following my beloved characters on their journey! :)
3/23/24, 1:16 AM
Oh god, this is so hot. Them fucking each other from their original body. Thats such a hot concept. Lookinng forward to where this story would go.
3/23/24, 12:27 AM
H fucking SHIT this is so damn good!!! 🥵🥵🥵🤤🤤🤤🤩🤩🤩🤩
3/8/24, 3:20 PM
Really hot, great stuff! I like these stories that seem like a personal fantasy from the author, always feels intimate. Small writing tip: remember that character dialogue gets a new paragraph each time the speaker changes. > "Hello," I said, "how are you?" > "I'm fine, thanks." they replied. It's usually always best to add line breaks if there's a lot of action between the dialogue, too. > "I ate the hotdog." I said, rubbing my stomach. > "Then I ate the chips." I said tossing the empty bag into the trash. >"Then I drank the soda." I finished, replacing the bottle cap. Makes it easier for the reader to follow.

3/8/24, 6:54 PM
@[bak2jak](/user/show/141970) [https://i.pinimg.com/736x/f5/09/d6/f509d62a8d7e7f8e327bbc342db8cd43.jpg](https://i.pinimg.com/736x/f5/09/d6/f509d62a8d7e7f8e327bbc342db8cd43.jpg)

3/22/24, 3:46 PM
@[Skyboundbull](/user/show/10006422) While waiting to be asked to give advice can be a good general rule at times, I think their intentions were pure and their tone was very encouraging and constructive. Part of posting any kind of creative work on a public forum is getting criticism. And I'd love to get criticism as thought through and positive as @bak2jak wrote here.
3/22/24, 7:48 AM
Brad wouldn't be able to control his impulses and cast another spell, would he? :p
3/17/24, 12:48 PM
Love this series

3/22/24, 5:42 AM
@[SirD](/user/show/946083) Glad you do! It’s fun to write!
3/14/24, 1:35 PM
So hot! Hope you continue this story!

3/22/24, 5:41 AM
@[S.147](/user/show/10025257) Thank you! Any suggestions/comments are appreciated!
Itsmethevoid
3/22/24, 5:23 AM
Ughhh yes I looove where this is going …
3/21/24, 9:27 PM
Brad is slowly corrupting himself to be a bottom slut and im into it.
3/21/24, 7:25 AM
Really well done. Such a compelling story. Oh and it’s insanely hot.
3/21/24, 7:04 AM
Another excellent chapter from a great series
3/21/24, 6:54 AM
I have to say, I am not generally a big fan of the superhero/villain genre, but you bring an enthralling Dominant/submissive-Master/slave power exchange vibe to it that makes it super hot and super magical!
Sss
3/21/24, 12:51 AM
I'm really interested on where the plot is going.
3/20/24, 11:32 PM
Such an enthralling series. Can’t wait for more
Anonymous
3/20/24, 10:51 PM
I actually feel connected and care about the characters. This is a great story and all the chapters are fcking hot too!! :fire: :fire: I'll be eagerly waiting for the next update!
3/20/24, 6:09 PM
I love this series so much 🤤
3/20/24, 5:50 PM
Wow, this was intense. Fantastic ride.
3/17/24, 12:22 PM
Fun story!

3/20/24, 3:31 PM
@[BobbyBlobfish](/user/show/700733) Thank you
3/20/24, 9:02 AM
Hope there will be more chapters after the special event!
3/19/24, 9:47 PM
Probably not the direction this take. However, to get the attention of his roommate, it would be hot that the not bright Monty use steroid. Try to look hotter and catch more attention as the extra testosterone make him horny as well as more pump.
3/19/24, 1:20 PM
Why I found this story so late? I don't know. It's a great plot, and I'm sure, it's worth a second part.
3/19/24, 7:51 AM
Oh damn!! 🤩
Sss
3/17/24, 11:23 PM
Well, you do suck a good cock Should be Well, you do suck a cock well. Enjoyed it

3/19/24, 1:08 AM
@[Sss](/user/show/10004965) Oh I read this as riffing on a more conventional expression (aka, “well, you do cook a mean steak”). So I read the grammatical construction as being intentional, and part of the joke? At least that was my take on it…
3/19/24, 12:35 AM
Love Monty’s emotional evolution. Really looking forward to part 4.
3/18/24, 11:13 AM
Really love this series so far!