This was great. I like how you kept it simple all throughout. I appreciate stories that go exactly where you expect them to go. Good job!

I love the story about father and son in relationships very much. I hope you can write more about it. Changing the age and body is also good.

What a pity! This series don't move forward. Easily one of my favorites from recent years. I hope Iriefall returns this series someday.

Oh my freaking goodness, this is so freaking good!!!! CHOICES MAKE A MAN! And the mistakes influence those choices, sometimes unexpectedly. ❤️🖤❤️🖤❤️🖤

Both parts of this story are so great! It’s so well-written, fun concept and exceptionally hot. It was a great read because it felt fresh and fun. I loved the joy the characters felt about their bodies and the attraction to smaller guys. I’d love to see another part, but if we don’t, I’m happy we got these two chapters. They both made me cum!

Dude this was one of the best stories I've read on the site as someone who loves hypermasculinity, jocks, and muscle. Excellent writing, great and individualized characters, and VERY sexy. All the characters are really fun and likeable. I really liked Chase's growth with his bicuriosity, and his relationship with Oliver is really well developed and natural. Benito being that cocky stud on campus who annoys you but you always fantasize about. Eric was really sexy and I liked his bluntness and his banter with Benito. I also found Richard to be a very amusing character, he reminded me of Prince Wu from the Legend of Korra. Chase and Oliver's talk and kiss in the sauna- so sexy and natural. Eric and Patrick sucking Benito's cock was hot especially as it was their first time doing something with another guy. Eric and Benito fucking Patrick was also amazing. The BEST scene is the locker room orgy before the big game. So fucking beautiful. The tension building up as Chase calls Oliver over and begins sucking him as everyone watches. Eric fucking Benito. Chase licking Oliver's musky pits as he fucks him. I nutted when all the football jocks nutted on Chase and covered him in sperm. Fuck man. I'm not sure if the loophole to coach's rule was supposed to be obvious to the reader, since I assumed his rule said "girlfriend" to generally mean partner, so Chase revealing the orgy inducing loophole did surprise me and get my heart pumping. I also really enjoyed Eric and Benito as Asian and Latino characters, both had unique traits and were important to the story. Many authors (white) really don't know how to write poc's without disrespecting them in one way or another so it was really nice to see. I liked that Eric was the more masculine and assertive one in his relationship. Since Chase's ethnicity was never imagined, I envision him as this tall beefy stud from my gym who to me looks Latino (and who I think definitely looks like a football player). If I had some suggestions, I would like more emphasis on pecs! More pecs, more armpits. The story mentioned musk and sweat a lot which was good though. Overall one of the best stories here. PLEASE, consider making a sequel. I really want to see how Chase and Oliver's relationship grows.

I really want a neighbor like Ozzy for myself, where can I get one? Lol this was an extremely hot chapter my friend, and I loved all the rimming and the manipulation these two sluts managed to do to sweet, hunky Ozzy. I can’t wait to see how they will manipulate him next… maybe into fucking their tight holes?

Charlie pointed me here, and I'm glad he did because this was a really fun romp! A friendly competition and scorekeeping between two slutty friends, and even the very _idea_ of an "after-fuck pizza" is just so..._**porny**_, I love it! You have a really fun and personable style of writing that suits this type of story. Very well done! Keep up the good work!

Hot as fuck story as always! That rimming is chefs kiss!!

Hope this continues soon