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7/11/22, 8:30 AM
where is ch 5??? i thought i saw it was released?

7/11/22, 10:14 AM
@Kinkypup Hey, you're right it was, but i was in the middle of moving house so i feel like i rushed it. Its not really up to my standard atm so im gonna re-do and post later
Bl guy
6/25/22, 6:12 PM
I really like where this story's going... it seems like Xander's also falling for Allan and I want him to realize his feelings...

7/8/22, 6:14 PM
@Bl guy Well not to be a terrible tease... No wait actually that's exactly what I'm about to do... Wait until you read part 5, which is hopefully coming by the end of this month.

Bl Guy
7/11/22, 8:17 AM
@Nocturne13 Can't wait to read chapter 5, this story's got me hooked both for how hot it is and also cause the actual story and the developing relationships between the characters is soo good, there are very few stories where you can find both of these... take your time and deliver a masterpiece like you always do
Evan
7/10/22, 9:31 PM
Incredible! What a fantastic story. Just on its own it is magnificent and as an entry for Toxic Masculinity it's a wonderful and imaginative take on it. Shining even brighter given the requirement of the theme. The gradual build, the resistance and tension of avoiding Tao spreading his milk to others was wonderful and had me invested. His succumbing was probably inevitable but HOW that happened was glorious. Mentally more than physically. But both were perfect. The Axel eventually figuring out he and Tao love each other and his overcompensation is costing them happiness. Frantically trying to avoid being changed by a stranger. Wanting it to be Tao. So romantic and hot. Then the conclusion of their accepting each other and growing and pounding. Even when they lose their minds for a fortnight, they stick together. Very sweet. Puck is a mystery. And the two weeks of mindless horny fucking and feeding to change others is hot too. But also mysterious. Why two weeks. Why do they change back. How do they feel afterward. What happens to others changed during the two weeks, being already past 12. Instantly mindless bulls to join the rest? I also find the worldbuilding on this subtle but intriguing. Nut butter sounds like it has cum in it. The military fucking for conquest and dominating each other both for contest and for fun. Loved this. Well done!

7/11/22, 6:53 AM
@Evan The number of times I’ve read this comment in sheer delight embarrassed me. But I am proud to be proud of my work, and grateful that you loved it! You saw everything I was going for, you appreciated the little tidbits of worldbuilding I left—that’s my signature, I feel, is blending subtle worldbuilding into a story that can handle those extra hints—and you hit the nail on the head with nut butter. Yes, it involves cum. I hope I accomplished the effect of making the world feel like a real one, in which these characters live—even if some of its facts are surprising and not yet explainable, like the sex-based military. And Puck. Please, if you can, spread this around—I’m posting pretty late in the contest, and I can use all the ratings I can get. But don’t feel obligated. A review like this was enough to make me feel pride in my own work, and that’s enough reward for me!
Meddler Incs
7/10/22, 7:04 PM
Amazing story! (Also, _Puck_?!? What is that fae doing in this story universe!? :rofl: :raised_eyebrow: :monocle_face:)

7/10/22, 7:45 PM
@Meddler Incs I'm glad you enjoyed it! Puck is meant to be a teaser of the deeper lore behind the events of this story. I'm still spinning that out in my other stories on this site; he's been referenced in one story I've published and will have another mention later. I thought it'd be a fun little tidbit, and I left it until the end, so I hope it wasn't distracting =P

7/10/22, 8:34 PM
@The Author (name hidden due to challenge) Oh no, it was a perfect monkey wrench! That right amount of jarring that polished off the rest of the story. I like stuff like that. :satisfied:
6/19/22, 3:57 PM
This is one of the HOTTEST stories I have ever read in this site and in my life in general. As someone who grew up watching anime and reading manga, I have always wanted to see an erotic story about magical boys in super tight and skimpy clothing, with hot bodies, big assess and who always end up getting fucked by allies and villains alike - so you nailed every single thing on my checklist here. Also, the dirty talking and transformation of the magical boys into unapologetic sluts is so fucking hot. I always knew I wanted to see super slutty, whore like magical boys and you just delivered it to me. This story got me off so well last night and I got incredibly hot with Araci calling Max “Superslut”. Is there any way this could actually be his official superhero name? That would be really sexy to see, only if it’s just how he is called online by people… Also, kudos to you for Araci, I’m Brazilian and I loved all the references to my country. I can’t wait to see the other Magical Boys who will get into the group and turned into slutty heroes and also can’t wait to see the reaction of people as well when they start noticing their saviors getting more and more slutty and exposed as the story goes. Cheers dude, please don’t take too long to post another chapter, I already know I’ll reread this a lot till you do!

7/8/22, 4:16 AM
@Elmara I have just read your bio and saw that you are nonbinary, so I’d like to apologize for calling you dude and any other misgendering I might have done in my haste to praise your story. Was just checking out to see if there was an update when I saw your bio. Hope you’re well!

7/9/22, 1:45 AM
@Elmara Thank you so much for this comment and your enthusiasm for this story! "dude" is totally fine to call me, and we just didn't have the chance to answer because of timing! Actually, we have one more long scene to write before we'll be ready to edit and then share the next parts! We'll be introducing another Magical Boy~! So glad that we're hitting those buttons and love that you get to enjoy Araci as a Brazilian! <3 Superslut would make a great press nickname for Max!
7/6/22, 1:50 AM
I check this story out everyday to see if there’s an update ;) can’t wait for more!

7/9/22, 1:35 AM
@Elmara <3 <3 <3
7/9/22, 12:32 AM
I had to wait all week to have the time to really sit down and read this chapter. I'm so happy to see where you've lead us, and seeing Paul and his boys reunited. I love that prices were payed, even those that hurt, but it just gives everything so much more depth. You are writing a Saga, and you know I'm in for the ride. I hope to keep reading so much more and loving the nod to the the other initiate I was hoping to get to see again. Kudos!
Jul 6, 2022
Martin
7/8/22, 8:49 PM
Lovely and hot story!
7/8/22, 6:11 PM
Hi. I'm sorry for the delay. The next chapter has actually already been drafted but I had some things come up in real life that have prevented me from finishing it up. More material is on the way though!
Bl guy
6/25/22, 1:43 PM
Though imma bit confused by the story and its pacing right now, like last chapter we got to know that Azman and the Holy Ruler's son were in love whereas here we see Azman and the Holy Ruler had something going on... I thing it will be clearer in due time

Jonanator
7/5/22, 5:26 AM
@Bl guy Hey, thanks for the comment. I know, it does seem a bit confusing. It will become clearer later on. I have been busy since the last time I wrote, but now that school is out, and I am free a bit, I will be able to continue. I generally watch a lot of Asian shows on a daily basis of Viki, so they do give me great ideas for what to use here (and other stories).

Bl guy
7/7/22, 7:07 AM
@Jonanator Glad to know you're great and also for replying to the mail I sent... looking forward to what you write latter. I get it, cause my chrome tabs are just filled with MDL and VIKI sites (and some others which I can't get on VIKI). Any specific shows you're watching which you'd recommend?

Jonanator
7/7/22, 3:00 PM
@Bl guy I am watching a bit of shows right now, mostly in China, there's really two reasons why I'm watching a lot of shows from there. In terms of which ones I think you should watch, let me see which ones are the best, and then I'll get it to you.

Bl Guy
7/8/22, 7:06 AM
@Jonanator I recently watched Ancient Love Poetry and Hotel Del Luna, and tbh I loved both of them. I'm thinking of restarting Ashes of Love from where I left it off (I had to stop watching it in the middle cause i just couldn't stand the stuff Runyu was going through, it was too much for me, and lemme tell you I get easily attached to the drama characters). My all time favorite xianxia would have to be Love and Redemption. If you have an MDL account, I can send you friend request and we can share dramas there...