What a Revelation! And definitely my favorite kind of apocalypse, when the spiritual upheaval leads to such heights of insight and pleasure mingled together. And here I was, feeling for poor Talley all the time. It’s been quite the phantom release for me too! Thanks for the gift, as ever

OK, damnnnnnnnnnnn bro! I loved the first chapter of this and put in my comments how it made me dump 3 loads before I made it all the way through. Then I got to this part. I was going nuts for this through the whole thing, and largely because of the first story. I had anticipation for the transformation and what was going on, so the fact that you seemed to really draw things out with him being at the party and running into a ton of the jocks. The changes start slow and as I'm reading I'm looking for every clue and asking myself "Is it happening? Is it speeding up?" Since I had the info from the first story I was on the edge of my seat. Then I got to the game of beer pong. He's oblivious to the "conversion juice" he's been given. I love that. He thinks he's doing well. He's changing as the game goes on. Getting cockier. I loved when he walked in and they were breaking up their huddle around the beer pong cups and pulling up their jockstraps and shorts. FUCK. I want to guzzle that juice down. So it's no surprise to me that the effect of the beer pong is what made me nut first in this chapter. I got that far, though, cuz it was such a slow burn. Then after a break I come back to the story and pick up where I left off. Now it's the two of them going at it in the bedroom and I'm right on the edge of cumming thru all the transformation and all. Your descriptions are amazing. It's so well done! As he's changing and his cock is transforming, a couple of times he makes a comment that something is happening in the base of his cock. But it just gets left and other changes are described. How his cock turns deep red, then how it's growing and thickening and he's pistoning in and out, and there's some cocky talk back and forth, and he's noticing that the base is changing again getting thicker and veinier, and you just keep teasing it along -- which drove my own cock nuts cuz i'm obsessed with knotted cock, myself, and so I'm in total anticipation of this. And then it happens. His knot forms. And it's like the final change that completes him. And that's what made me dump load #2, right along with him pumping his own jizz into Anthony and bloating his belly, and Anthony is cumming but he's drinking all that "brotein" down right as it is being squirted out. Thank you for this amazing story. I am definitely going to revisit it and I won't be surprised if I cum in all the same places.

I was reading this story got to the end and was like damn that was a great story. I'm enjoying it more and more. I personally can't wait for the next chapter.

Always fun to have some Himbo Sun in my day 🌞

This story was AMAZING. I blasted out 3 loads in the course of reading it all. The character establishment in the beginning is well done and thorough, which makes the transformation so much better cuz we see so many changes. The description of the physical changes is unbelievable. So hot. I was hanging on every sentence. Thank you so much!

I actually really enjoyed how he turned into a bully :)

Woah so sexy. Don’t keep us waiting too long for more chapters. Scalding hot.

What an unexpected chapter. You keep coming up with amazing new and different ways to show Tanners corrupting influence. I love it. When I first read the summary I expected that Tanner would influence the debate itself making the debate teams discuss unsuitable subjects like sex, masturbation, exhibitionisme, male body appreciation, Farther-son relations and so on. With Tanners help the debate teams could have reached some interesting conclusions that would have had the assembly agree on quite disturbing behaviours. So I was surprised to see the story pick up at the end of the debate. But the ritual was a fun addition. I am a little bit sad that it was just forgotten. I am generally not a big fan of the "When I snap my fingers you will forget everything that has happened". I think I would have been much hotter if everyone in the room would just consider this the normal way to end a debate. Or at least that the mantras the teacher repeated will stick with him and form his personality. He will think of himself as the master of debate and exposure without remembering the actual ritual. But on the other hand I do love the part between Jiang and Aidan at the end, where the other guy just completely accepts that of course they are gonna forget as soon as the leave the room and that Jiang is the weird one for not understanding that. It is so deliciously absurd. Please keep up the good work. Every week that goes by without a new chapter is agony.

Nooooo. You were one of my favorite authors. I’m sad to see you go

Really excited for another part