Recent Comments

8/24/22, 7:40 AM
This becomes more intriguing and mystical with every chapter, keep up the excellent work!

8/26/22, 5:41 AM
@Twan Andersen Thank you, Twan. Still gonna get weirder!
Steve McBeezelbub
8/26/22, 1:45 AM
Not to rush you or anything but I DESPERATELY NEED MORE INSTALLMENTS OF THIS HOT, SILLY SERIES!!!!! That's all.
8/25/22, 12:20 PM
I’m really digging the slow burn! It has me curious what’s happening mentally in Jack and Finn, and I’m also curious about the parallels between the MMO Jack plays and what Rada plays. I’m sure you’re drawing out something fiendishly clever and I’m looking forward to it!
8/22/22, 9:12 PM
Such a great story. Thank you!
8/21/22, 1:42 PM
i love this story. Does it continue? THey are just the sexiest pairing of two men.

8/21/22, 3:18 PM
@MChicago Yeah I should post a new chapter every couple of weeks :)
8/21/22, 6:41 AM
Reading this gave me a boner!
8/21/22, 6:40 AM
This is one of my favourite series. I hope to see where it goes. Thanks for writing and sharing :heart:
8/18/22, 6:02 AM
Fantastic chapter! Jack sounds so real, you've really done an amazing job in characterization. And just when things were about to get heated... you got them gaming together! So awesome! I love how Finn is slowly falling for insecure Jack but how Jack is the boss in-game. Which, incidentally, was also very interestingly fleshed out, cheers to that too! I hope you keep going, this is such a cute story, and Rada is sure to complicate it interestingly.

8/21/22, 1:52 AM
@Essex Knowing the characterization is working for people is really gratifying. I was a little worried the swerve works bother people but I'm uh... edging my readers. Look forward to a fun twist next part.
8/18/22, 4:09 AM
This story is the wish I didn’t know i needed. It rubs my lamp in all the right ways. I usually hate a slow burn but I love the focus on the characters so much that I am fine with letting you edge me. Thank you and I am excited for what comes next.

8/21/22, 1:51 AM
@Unruly Dogboy Thank you! Means a lot.
8/17/22, 8:08 PM
Really, really enjoying this. 😛😛😛

8/21/22, 1:51 AM
@NeedControlling thanks!