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Sebastián Apollo
10/31/22, 4:59 AM
I'm always amazed when people make these worlds and universes and can write stories that seamlessly fit into them - I'm incredibly envious. As A Possession a Day noted, the worldbuilding you flowed throughout the story along with the mystical elements really serves the work well. Great job, and a very worthy contender!

10/31/22, 2:52 PM
@[Sebastián Apollo](/user/show/10029736) It gets easier as the world grows and fills out! The world of Consummation is two years in the making, and still evolving. I actually did a fair amount of history and magic system work to construct the game of questions in this story, at least its original iteration (the draft I finished Friday). I’m glad you enjoyed what I built here! Feels good to know that I’m accomplishing the themes and feelings I intended. And I’m looking forward to reading your most recent story, too…
Anonymous
10/31/22, 4:50 AM
the theme isn't specifically for me but like, dude as a gay enby it's so fucking awesome to see trans positive content on this site. keep it up man!

10/31/22, 2:21 PM
It’s certainly hard when intersections of intersections of intersections of kinks and interests narrow things down, I’ve certainly experienced it myself—but thanks for still reading! I have a few trans friends that I frequently run things by to ensure that my representation is positive and respectful. It’s a joy to do it and I’m always hoping that trans readers will feel safe reading my work. I do have a slow burn romance one-shot coming out soonish with a trans guy as one of the two main characters. No mind control or magic or anything, though there’ll certainly be some smut. Keep an eye out for _Late Night Beers on the Beach_, maybe?
10/31/22, 3:05 AM
I mean, it said possession on the tin so I had to click 😌 Hope you're not tired of me saying this but unfortunately this story was not for me. By no means does this make a _bad_ story in any way, I just have annoyingly niche tastes 😅😅 Still, I enjoyed your worldbuilding, your passion, and indeed the mystical vibe you wove throughout Aaron's journey into depths unknown and I appreciate a lot of the skill that went into your writing, thanks for that hit of magic! 😘

10/31/22, 2:15 PM
@[A Possession A Day](/user/show/1060663) Yeah, sometimes you just have something you’re looking for that isn’t everywhere! Besides, I don’t know any of the tropes and I just saw ‘possession’ as a tag and was like “hmmmm what can I come up with from literally just this word?” Still, I’m glad the story elements stuck out to you! I had a lot of fun with the worldbuilding and magic on this one, so it’s great to know that it shone through.
10/31/22, 1:34 PM
As someone who's a sucker for love stories, I absolutely adored this one. Thank you for writing this story :)
10/31/22, 12:00 PM
Fascinating concept, the basic transformation itself is something that's very hot to me and you've wrapped it up in a very intriguing premise. The idea of changing your identity so drastically like that, giving up so much but then gaining in return, what you would or wouldn't do for love... there's a lot to explore there.
10/31/22, 8:51 AM
Unff stop it. This is inspired. Sweet but very sexy
10/31/22, 5:23 AM
Totally loved the seduction of omega. I think the story is beautifully told, and you created a new world I hope that you explore more of. We need to learn about frat guy beta, gamma, and kappa. Who gave which piece of the perfect body, smile, and ass. The sex scene was so hot. I loved it. Really, I enjoyed the werewolves explanation. That's the brilliant guy I see online. 😃
10/31/22, 4:10 AM
You have such a unique point of view and the creativity to make it shine. Another great story with heart. You could have approached the same idea from many viewpoints but chose the more interesting and heartfelt one. Kudos!
10/31/22, 4:09 AM
This is so wholesome and so unbelievably hot.
10/31/22, 2:46 AM
Loved the worldbuilding in this one! It's interesting reading from the perspective of someone who doesn't know whether the pack is a cult or not. That sort of thing is always hard to tell. Great job writing a poignant story about the things we should or shouldn't do for love.