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11/8/22, 11:06 PM
Love the pup play part of superpups training. I wonder what is going to happen between Lex and Python? Can't wait for more.

11/9/22, 5:43 AM
@[Redcoma100](/user/show/41857) Hi Redcoma100!! Thanks 4 your positive comments & glad you're continuing to ENJOY the ongoing storyline! Happy 2 hear you're diggin the pup training--it's gonna continue to UNFOLD, so I hope you ENJOY it!! Lex & Python's "detente discussion" will also be an ever-evolving situation, which I hope will surprise (& satiate!) you/other readers!:smiling_imp: SO GR8FUL 4 your ongoing, positive support & Have a GR8 night!:innocent:
11/8/22, 10:35 PM
I'm not sure why but it's hot that Python continues to call Lex "master" even while having a complete meltdown. Maybe they'll arrive at some form of detente by "working off some steam" :smiling_imp:

11/9/22, 5:38 AM
@[anarchomegalomaniac](/user/show/907794) Hi Anarchomegalomaniac!! Thanks 4 your positive comments & glad you're continuing to ENJOY the ongoing storyline! The pup training & the detente discussion between Luthor & Python, will continue to unfold (in multiple layers), so I hope you ENJOY how it all "gets unpacked"!! Appreciate the positive support!! :smiling_imp:
11/8/22, 3:18 PM
Love what you did with Batman. I could just picture him in is new uniform. Oh that ending. What will Python do when he finds out his super slut was telling him the truth? I guess we will just have to wait and see what will happen in the next chapter.

11/8/22, 3:50 PM
@[Redcoma100](/user/show/41857) Hi Redcoma100!! Thanks 4 your positive comments & appreciation of the ongoing storyline!! Glad U were diggin on the "Python cliffhanger"-- there's DEF MORE 2 CUM (& unravel!) in forthcoming chapters, so please stay tuned to this BAT CHANNEL (LOL)!! VERY GR8FUL 4 the positivity & Have an SUPA-Day!:innocent:
Zai
11/8/22, 8:26 AM
My big question, Dude, is why is Bruce|Batman so friendly and cool with Lex? And the same for Dr. Strange? I realize this is an AU, but since you already had canon feels Superman v. Lex Luthor in the beginning of the story, I'd assume that Wayne and Strange would have suspicions towards Lex. Hmmmmmmm... ??? However, Bruce & Lex act like besties and Hugo being all into hypnotising and bringing down Superman (and even Batman) seemed a bit out of left field. I'm not criticising you nor this chapter. It just perplexed me in its content. Please don't hate me. 🤔 As you know, I was hoping more of the canon, ever alert and suspicious Caped Crusader arriving and beginning to put his detective skills to use. Then alas, the Dark Knight's investigating soon would bring him to becoming a bitched dick-tective, lol. Above all, though, this is your story, your plot, your visions. And I don't want to throw shade or aspersions on it. So I'm going to now comment on what occurred in this chapter. Lex is one sly fox, huh? Bringing in a big gun like Bruce Wayne|Batman to mentally root and cement Superman's recently submissive & cunted psyche. And it's such a delight that the cunted psyche has a direct link to Clark|Superman's whorish and slutty oral and anal holes. It's going to be interesting to read the dialog you write that's going to occur between Bruce & Clark. Plus, will Bruce be Bruce Wayne or Batman & will Superman be in some slutty attire or his superhero costume, etc? Will Bruce|Batman be converted to ultimately top or bottom? I'm voting an utter bottom bitch, lol. That way Lex has SupaSlut & BatBitch under his total control. Imagine what you wrote earlier about Lex wanting to whore out the Big Blue Boy scout. The huge amounts of $ bank$ that'll bring in. The same would be true about whoring out Batman. Joker, Riddler, Penguin, Killer Croc, Solomon Grundy, Deathstroke, etc, etc, etc, would pay msny millions to own Batsy for a night. Again, please don't take my opening thoughts as negative feelings. I express my thoughts, yes, but I don't ever want to hurt feelings. You have a very vivid and keen imagination which you're able to translate quite well into creative writing. Thanks and high-gives, Dude! 🤔😋😎😊😉🤗👅

11/8/22, 2:22 PM
@Zai Ciao ZAI! Thanks so much 4 your thoughts-- you have EVERY right to voice them in this forum!! To be completely honest, and for the context of this particular story, Lex & Bruce are seemingly more allies than adversaries-- being completely transparent, I adapted their "somewhat warmer, yet unexpected relationship" from the "Batman vs. Superman-- Dawn of Justice" movie (& ran with it)...while it may have been "predictable" for Bruce to be immediately wary, I "slanted" Lex's call to Bruce as a "call out of sincere concern" with respect to Superman's behavior/well-being...a bit of "develish trickery" on Lex's part (as he is one of the 2 principal characters in the AU):smiling_imp: With respect to Professor Strange, in my mind's eye, has already been established as an ally of Lex's (and a "warped character" himself), who's helped Mr. Luthor in previous stories (that I've read in the past-- "Strange Dealings: The Fall Of Superman"), so he was "a natural fit". Perhaps, I'll readdress this point (& well taken!) in upcoming chapters, as MORE is to unravel with the BAT soon enough!! Anyways, SIR, I do appreciate your thoughts/feedback/insight, but my "twisted kinky mind" takes the story in these directions, so no negative feelings at all...and I'm eternally GRATEFUL that you CARE enough about this storyline to spend "quality personal time" to meticulously address some of your thoughts/concerns-- THANK YOU & have a SUPA-Productive Day!!:innocent:

Zai
11/8/22, 2:36 PM
@[supaboivsvillian](/user/show/10027379) You're cool, Dude! 😎 I'm glad you realized I wasn't being a dickwad, lol. And thanks for giving me a clear look at your vision and certain plot points. I for one truly appreciate all the time & effort you and other writers put into creating erotic stories for we starved fanfiction hounds. Adios and much gratitude! 😀😎😉👏👍🏻👌🏼✌🏼🖖👍🏻

11/8/22, 3:46 PM
@[Zai](/user/show/1897690) Cheers ZAI!! Why THANK YOU, kind SIR!!! (-- bowing to you kindly!)! YOU are SOOOO NOT a "dickwad", my friend-- you voiced your honest opinion/concerns/questions about the story/characters, and I feel compelled to answer/explain your respective comments in the most transparent fashion...which I hope I did to the best of your satisfaction! Zai, I sincerely appreciate your feedback....you make my day with "your opening lines", comments & suggested desired storylines-- YOU INSPIRE ME!!!! I hope that you see/read that I take your comments to heart!! Many THANKS, Much GRATITUDE & Ciao 4 NOW!!!:innocent:
Zai
11/8/22, 2:43 PM
Hola, Amigo! No probs cutting and pasting. Yes, I love Big Sur! My parents have a beach house in Carmel, so we made many a pilgrimages to the pristine and raw beauty that is Big Sur; since I was a wee one. I hope you have a great day, too! Later, Gator! 😀😁

11/8/22, 3:39 PM
@[Zai](/user/show/1897690) THANKS, ZAI!!! Wow, your multiple experiences at the family house in Carmel & beauty of Big Sur sound AWESOME (& vividly picturesque)!! YOU ROCK, DUDE-- Much appreciated of your time/assistance in extending Chapter 8 some LOVE!! SUPA-GR8FUL & ENJOY the DAY, Sir!!:sunny:
Zai
11/8/22, 2:52 PM
Dude! Whoa! Smutty Heat delivered! I love Jimmy’s cock being the official first human - homo erectus- to plow his once bestie. And yes, that was my attempt at pun-ny humour, lol; homo erectus. Yes, the young lad had all the advantages against the once mighty superhero, but I didn’t read no complaints from the Man of Squeals, did I. No that cunted bitch was euphoric to be taken by Jimmy’s boi-cock. What a fucking whore Clark has be-cum, huh!?!? Adding in Jimmy's sexy wrestling singlet and SupaPussi's pink, specially embroidered panties, we were left wanting more wanton action. Congrats on another steamy chapter! Long live SupaSlut becoming more sub and cock/cum crazed like the greedy little piggy we're cumming to 💓!!! Ciao!

11/8/22, 3:34 PM
@[Zai](/user/show/1897690) THANK YOU, ZAI!!!:smiling_face_with_three_hearts: Appreciate the LOVE for this chapter-- it's one of my FAVES (& means the world that you "picked up" on my PASSION)!!:stuck_out_tongue_winking_eye: Glad you took note of the respective wrestling gear, i.e., Jimmy's red-hot slinglet & Supes' bitched-out pink embroidered panties!!:hugs: I really enjoyed unpacking the intricasies of Jimmy's feelings of anger & betrayal (& hero worship) against Superman, which were only magnified by his "roid rage"-- having him "turn on his hero" so violently & in SUCH a dominating fashion was an uber-THRILL for me!!:muscle: Again, SUPER GR8FUL 4 the positive comments & continued ENJOYMENT of the storyline-- YOU ROCK, SIR!!:innocent:
Anonymous
11/8/22, 3:27 PM
I really hope Luke and Sammy get together! I love the sex aspect but I really liked the romance Sammy has!
Zai
11/7/22, 2:41 PM
Dude! Dude!! DUDE!!! These last four chapters were SO KINKY, SO NASTY, and SO SURFACE OF THE SUN H🌞T! You wrote some nice prep work for SuperBitch! Then you added in bringing Bizzaro Jon-El for the auction; but the big clincher was Connor, aka Superboy showing up to volunteer to be another slave-boi trophy for the highest bidder! Superboy, or now known as Superboi-toi, is a clone comprised of Lex' & Superman's DNA. So does that illustrate that the cloned 🍎 apple didn't fall far from his genetic providers trees? As in Lex is pretty much a gay stud and apparently Superman has those, ummm, tendencies within himself, too! So it makes sense Conner craves cock as a bottom slut whore as well. I wonder if Dick gets to dick Conner's virgin boi-pussy or is Superboi-toi a pro already at sucking and getting plowed? And, I'm wondering if Bruce checks his wards finances, won't he wonder the how's & why's of where $1 million bucks went to? That could be a second valid reason Batman goes to investigate Lex and LuthorCorp. Along with trying to find his friend and fellow hero, Superman. Ooohhhhh, I hope you have Lex being the main one to train Bruce Wayne/Batman in the ways of queer slave training. I bet Bruce harbours a secret lust for Lex. Always noticing Luthor's handsome face, glorious musculature and magnificent bulge... and tight, round muscled ass! *shaking my overly vivid & horny I imagination... ... ... whew 😛😜* Now back to these awesome chapters, lol. I love Jimmy having such wanton lust and lascivious needs for cock, now. The young photographer now has images of cocks in his mind instead of capturing the next amazing shot of Superman bering a hero. That boi is now a goner for big boners, huh? Lex!? What a horndog for eating and drilling boi-cunt with his big ol' Daddy tongue. Keep on munching Lex, keep on munching. But, my fave part in these last 4 chapters is the 2 on 1 and 2 in 1 *filthy lol* action with Phython & Rico utterly decimating a very, very willing and wanton Man of Steel... or now known as *drum roll 🥁*, the Man OF Squeal!!! Yes, I'd venture a guess that soon enough, there'll be absolutely no need of any drugs, gas, or forms of Kryptonite to control or aid in SupaFags conversion. Reading about how blissfully bitched out the superhero is now! Taking cocks like the hungry whore he's become? Spit-roasted with glee! Becoming a double-stuffed Kryptonian Oreo? Yelling out his complete submission as he's realizing that he was meant to service Lex? Service Python? Service Jimmy? Service Rico? Service COCK! Oh, yes! Superman is definitely falling down that rabbit hole faster and faster; into the Wonderlad of Bitchdom!!! Thanks for 4 more awesome chapters! Wet Dreams, Ahoy, lol, lol, lol! 😜😛🌞🥁🍎😉😍

11/7/22, 4:54 PM
@Zai Ciao ZAI!! I cannot express enough GRATITUDE for your "squealing endorsement" of these last 4 chapters!!! Really enjoyed your praise, various recap/synopses & of course, your multiple suggestions, which BTW, I hope U notice the introduction of the BAT (& some of the specific clothing & gear references in the last few chapters (esp. Chs. 13-14!)!!! I sometimes wonder if a couple of these chapters "get lost" (so to speak) OR "fall through the cracks" from some of the readers, when multiple chapters get posted ...as the Jimmy Olsen vs. Supabitch (Ch. 8) got "glossed over" by many, and (imho) I thoroughly enjoyed writing that chapter as Jimmy "roidfully" beats down the Supacunt with not only wrestling skills, but then his dominant (& masterful!) fucking of the Supawhore's asshole! THRILLED that you're continuing to ENJOY the storyline & I hope to continue to do so!! Have a GR8 Week, Kind Sir!:smiling_imp:

Zai
11/8/22, 5:35 AM
@[supaboivsvillian](/user/show/10027379) OMG! Fuck me gently with a chainsaw! *contrite lol* And hand me a V-8 veggie juice! ASAP! I plum forgot to mention the Jimmy/Supes wrestling match. I was so excited by the orgy and SuperHomo getting split open by Python & Rico, that my commenting train of thought derailed a bit. Sorry, Dude! So, here's my thoughts on Jimmy dominating Superman... yum, hot, kinky, extraordinary, superb... are just some simple adjectives but I'll add more details. I love Jimmy's cock being the official first human - homo erectus- to plow his once bestie. And yes, that was my attempt at pun-ny humour, lol; homo erectus. Yes, the young lad had all the advantages against the once mighty superhero, but I didn't read no complaints from the Man of Squeals, did I. No that cunted bitch was euphoric to be taken by Jimmy's boi-cock. What a fucking whore Clark has be-cum, huh!?!? As for frequency of publishing chapters? That's up to you, Dude. I don't blame you for worrying that certain facts and nuances may go unnoticed. I try to comment on each chapter when I can, but four chapters in a row was too tempting and attention grabbing to stop and comment each chapter. My excuse was I was on a short trip and didn't have access to any internet for much of that period (we were mountain biking & camping Big Sur). However, if you wanted to, publish a new chapter every two days. That way there still a nice frequency yet keeps our breath bated for what comes & who cums next! *absolutely filthy lol and eyewink* Looking forward to reading about Batman finally entering the story. I also hope Lex can turn Nightwing, aka Dick Grayson into one of his growing numbers of superhero harem bitches. Ciao!

11/8/22, 2:36 PM
@Zai Cheers ZAI!! You make my day with your comments-- LOVE your "opening lines"...they are CLASSIC!!! If I may please ask you to "do me one solid"...could you possibly please cut & paste your respective comments about the Jimmy vs. Superbitch wrestling match & post it under the Chapter 8 comments, so other prospective readers might be drawn to it....as it is PERSONALLY, one of my FAVE chapters in this AU!!! THANK YOU in advance 4 doing this (& of course, WHEN you have the time!!)!! Thanks also for your reply/advice & thoughts about the releasing of chapters...I will take your suggestions accordingly -- I did wonder where you were over the weekend (when I didn't hear from you/see any comments from you), but I hope that you thoroughly ENJOYED Big Sur-- I lived in the L.A. area some years back, but my career pursuits prevented me from ever making it up there...(but maybe someday)!! There's more to CUM (& certainly more to unravel!), so I'm happy that you're diggin on the direction(s)-- I'm ALWAYS GRATEFUL 4 your input/suggestions!! Have an AWESOME day!:innocent:
11/7/22, 10:09 PM
Oh man you brought in the Bat! And in such a hot way, First to be his rock then just crumble and pelt him with the pebbles! So excited for the next chapter! I hope down the line we also get a wrestling match with the two of them with Batman just using everything in his arsenal to humiliate his former friend. Thanks for another Chapter!

11/8/22, 2:02 AM
@[AxelCyclone](/user/show/44164) Hey Axel!! THANK YOU 4 the addt'l positive comments/ENERGY & I’m THRILLED that you dug how the BATMAN was introduced into the storyline! Bruce/BATMAN will DEF be around for a few chapters, so you can be SURE that he will have his "more dominant moment(s)" with SUPES in the ring!! Glad you're "VYBING" the new chapters & again, I'm SO GR8FUL 4 Your kind words & positivity! MANY THANKS (again) & Have a GR8 night!!!😇
11/6/22, 8:37 PM
Man Crazy how you keep releasing chapters so quickly! Is this story already done and you are just posting chapters at a time or are you just as crazy talented at making hot stuff as I think you are? Either way thanks for the hot story and excited to see whats in store! Any chance of seeing Conner or Jon in a similar position as Clark? Or even just in the story?

11/6/22, 9:57 PM
@[AxelCyclone](/user/show/44164) Hi AxelCyclone!! Thanks so much for your kind words & positive comments!! Believe it or not, the story is NOT done-- initially, I had several chapters completed and then strategically staggered them so I could assess your/the readers' feedback, so I could determine if my overall direction was intriguing enough to keep it going--so while I still consider myself to be "a bit of a novice writer", all of your various positive comments have fueled me to "keep the wheels turning" in the windmills of my twisted/kinky mind!!:smiling_imp: To answer your question, Conner & Jon (as Bizarro Jon-El, BJ-EL) have already made "cameo appearances" in previous chapters (The "SUPA-SLAVE Auction), but will be returning for "return engagements" SOON!! Glad that you're ENJOYING the storyline & I hope 2 continue to satisfying/satiating your various "kink appetites" in forthcoming chapters-- ENJOY your Sunday & again, I'm SO GRATEFUL 4 your positive words/comments!!:smiling_face_with_three_hearts:

11/7/22, 10:07 PM
@[supaboivsvillian](/user/show/10027379) Thats Pretty crazy that its still going so fast after so many chapters! You're doing amazing man! For the Jon/Conner i might have worded it a bit confusing. Was just saying if they would end up in a similar 'Superslut' position used and degraded like their old man but Ill take BizJon as Son degrading father is way too hot too pass up haha. Though you cant tell me Nightwing isnt using his 1mil purchase to good use making Conner the titans cumdump at home haha.

11/8/22, 1:49 AM
@[AxelCyclone](/user/show/44164) Thanks Axel!! I'm truly humbled & GRATEFUL 4 Your kind words & positive comments! SO glad 2 hear that you're continuing to ENJOY the storyline-- there's MORE 2 CUM, I assure U!:smiling_imp: I now understand your point about Jon-El more clearly & can share w/you that something like what you're suggesting is ON THE WAY in upcoming chapters!! I also promise 2 address the Dick/Connor pairing (from the Slave Auction!) SOON! Again, I sincerely appreciate the encouragement, addt'l ideas/suggestions & positive comments! MANY THANKS (again) & ENJOY your evening!!!:innocent: