Recent Comments

12/1/22, 6:42 AM
Wow, this was great! Very well written and very entertaining. I'm curious about the therapist's relationship with Jack's uncle Paul.

12/1/22, 6:41 PM
@[stimle](/user/show/969716) Thanks for your enthusiastic response, I'm planning a part 2 to the story perhaps your curiosity by satisfied. I've seen your stories - wicked sense of humour!

12/21/22, 10:18 AM
@[Whitechap_e1](/user/show/219792) I'm definitely curious of the uncles involvement as well. I figure he's either a sub himself or going to be the eventual owner of the main character. Looking forward to it!
12/21/22, 2:59 AM
Loving the story, but really missing the transformation that was promised in the tags. Side note, you should proofread your stories before submitting, there's a couple bits that seem like a word was cut off.

Dylan
12/21/22, 6:16 AM
@[nobody](/user/show/930612) Thank you for your comment! If i may ask : Were do you think words are missing, and why? Please send me examples , you could copy a sentence or a paragraph , ad the word , maybe in fat print or different colour , and send the examples to boy18cute@yahoo.com. Btw: In this series the lettering of the chapters is a little off, did you realize part one of the Johnny /Mark transformation is "Johnnys story. A fairytale" . And, since you asked for pictures: Check " A Dickson Enterprises Story : Dylan " Chapters 22,23,24 . Basically a comic, full of pics ;-) Have fun!
Dec 21, 2022
12/21/22, 5:07 AM
Fucking hot
12/21/22, 3:49 AM
I would suggest a paragraph format. This was hard to read as it is.
KKA
11/26/22, 3:04 PM
Great building up the tension! Such a creative way of doing this, and I’m excited to see where this goes.

12/21/22, 12:42 AM
@[KKA](/user/show/26116) Ooop, missed this comment in the end of semester rush. Thanks for the kind words! Next chapter is coming before the end of the year.
12/20/22, 4:13 AM
Why do I imagine Kyle becoming an uberdaddy with both of them as his bottoms?

12/20/22, 4:49 PM
@[Cutlerfan](/user/show/14171) That is one option. Not to far off from where it’s going.
12/19/22, 10:27 PM
I just went and did some ratings for chapter 2. While yes, I do prefer the blank Danny to slutty Danny (LOL) I do find slutty Danny really hot too. What I think for me is more of a difference between chapter 1 and chapter 2 is this... - In chapter 1 Danny becomes this blank sex doll type of person. Noah is pretty upset at what he has done, even knowing it's what Danny wanted, but what I find REALLY hot is how even as upset as he is, Noah's lust is totally in control. He uses Danny every which way for the whole weekend. I am turned on by how Noah's lust is so much stronger than his moral objections to what he has done to Danny. - In chapter 2 it was more planned by both of them -- Noah has his monthly check-in stipulation, Danny has come up with some kind of alternative personality instead of just being a blank. For these reasons, I don't see Noah's angst as nearly as strong, or as warranted. And yet it doesn't turn into a month-long fuckfest where Noah gets to do everything he wants with this very slutty obliging version of Danny. There's the initial sexual contact and then he makes slutty Danny stop. The new Danny's insistence and whining for more and how hungry he is for Noah's cum makes Noah think he needs to figure something out here (hence the possible directions the story could take). So in chapter 2, Noah isn't as angst-ridden, and also the abandon-yourself-to-the-lust component isn't there either. It's interesting. It's very hot. Hotter than most stories I come across. But chapter 1 really was mind-blowing for me (no pun intended). I don't usually write long comments like these. LOL. I don't know what's up with me. Usually my comments are along the lines of: "So fuckin hot. I came 3 times before I got thru the whole thing." Yeah, that sounds more like me. HAHA

Martin
12/20/22, 3:13 PM
@[Pwrliftermscl](/user/show/941605) Ok, you're now definitely very high up on my list of favorite readers... See, how easy I am to please :) I know exactly what you're saying and I agree. Once you've used an idea, you cannot repeat it. And if you make the mistake of starting with the hottest one... well, let's see what I come up with now. The thing is, it's always different kinds of nasty things which turn on different people. So I hope there's something for everybody in the end. But "I came 3 times" is amazing to read, too! So don't let me stop you!
12/19/22, 5:51 PM
Another super strong chapter. Can't wait to see how this pans out.

12/19/22, 6:39 PM
@[fanboi214](/user/show/908190) Hi Fanboi!! THANK YOU, Sir!:sparkler: Glad U enjoyed it...I appreciate your continued posivity & reinforcement! :smiling_face_with_three_hearts: There were SO many different directions I could've gone, but after hearing from you, I'm happy that I chose WISELY!! :boom: As always, I welcome your input/thoughts, as they continue 2 INSPIRE me!!:sparkles: Have an AWESOME day/week!:sun_with_face:

12/20/22, 6:06 AM
@[supaboivsvillian](/user/show/10027379) Honored to be an inspiration ;) I think all of the Bernard/Tim stuff is incredibly hot. Having two men fighting over Lex's cock, competing to be the biggest bitch is just *chef's kiss* And the fact they're boyfriends is a whole other level. Love that one of the heroes has Lex and co on the ropes for a minute. And as a huge fan ol' Mr. Grayson's think it's fun to see him actually get to be a top dog for a bit instead of a sidekick. I also think it's so clever how you set it all up, so that Dick's more sinister impulses are beginning to crop up. I find it so interesting that even though he has Rico on the hook, poor Rico hasn't gotten a taste of that genuine Dick Dick yet. Can't wait to see what happens when they cross paths with this new guy and/or Superman. :P

12/20/22, 2:54 PM
@[fanboi214](/user/show/908190) Hi Fanboi! You've made my day with your tidal wave:ocean: of positive thoughts/comments/input!!:blush: I'm GRATEFUL (& humbled)....especially that someone with your caliber of knowledge/interest can detect/surmize that I'm "really thinking" about the direction of the story as opposed to "just wingin it":raised_hands: P.S. I'm a "Double Virgo":virgo:, which is why I'm so "meticulous" (& detailed-oriented) with my storytelling:boom: You realize that you've "challenged" me to "really pull out ALL the stops" for this next chapter....don't YOU?!?!?:smiling_imp: I will do my utmost BEST 2 keep YOU "pumped":muscle: & "on the edge":smirk_cat: Have an AWESOME day:sun_with_face: & ENJOY the Holidaze!:christmas_tree:
12/20/22, 4:25 AM
I love the magical realism in this story and the vivid descriptions that accompany the setting and its supernatural inhabitants. Daki and Taba’s interactions are very convincing and already foreshadow an interesting relationship between them. (I also enjoyed the description of the food that Daki ate under the tree - it made me hungry!) The concluding sentence of the chapter > The 22-year-old would be lying if he said he wasn’t excited. is a fantastic cliffhanger. I can’t wait for the next part of the story!

12/20/22, 11:25 AM
@[TSquared](/user/show/968206) Thank you! Your feedback is very appreciated!
12/19/22, 11:25 PM
OMG A FELLOW FILIPINO

Javier Carrasco
12/20/22, 1:28 AM
@[Dapper](/user/show/912344) LOL! Maybe more of us will come out of the closet